wtf…… 发表于 2023-10-27 13:56

一个12岁的学生写的作文

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大四喜丸呢 发表于 2023-10-27 14:01

虎山居士 发表于 2023-10-27 14:06

牛家卧 发表于 2023-10-27 14:12

优秀的孩子

尼莫的表哥 发表于 2023-10-27 14:23

厉害啊，我记得初一的时候，大概也这么大，写了篇赶集，被老师当做两篇范文中的一篇在班上读，读的时候我都忘了是我写的，两篇读罢，对我的作文点评，用现在的话讲，就是凑字数，瞎几把写，毫无意义

野原新之助他爹 发表于 2023-10-27 14:27

卧槽12岁写这样？ 我本科毕业也写不出来   

hudiegu 发表于 2023-10-27 15:16

他经历了什么?

执手问年华 发表于 2023-10-27 15:46

看到文末家长评语，知道差距在哪了

因尤 发表于 2023-10-27 16:05

这孩子太可怕了，这文笔，厉害了

馒头包包 发表于 2023-10-27 17:39

不咋地
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